The in came assignment was for us to take a passage out of Christmas Carol and rewrite it to make our own version of the passage. I learned that Charles Dickens was paid by the word so he was very descriptive in his writing. I found that hardest part was to make my passage to flow and make scene. I thought the part did well on was picking a topic for the passage.                                          

                                                                                                        In Came

In came the sports writer with his notes, and went to press box, and made a harmony of it, and sounded like 1000 stampeding through the forest. In came Mike Singelatry, with a mind full of desire to win. In came four linebackers, sweaty and scary. In came three defense linemen, fat and satisfied will their lunch. In came practice dummies that could take one for the team. In came quarterback, with his protection the offensive line. In came the running back, with his hammer, the full back. In came the owner from far away land, who was suspected to not have paid his taxes; trying to hiding behind the sports announcer, who was well know around the world. In they all came, one after another, some eagerly, some smoothly, some quietly, some quickly, some running, some walking; in they all came, anyhow and everyhow. 

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    My name is Vincent Lopez. I'm 14 years old, and I like sports. For more info go to my About Me Page.


    January 2011



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